Hi Amanda, As you’ll see in my uploads, I added arrows to a few sections to make movements more obvious. Your scene and panel numbering was off... any cut that happens in a board should have a new scene number. The panels correspond to the poses of those scenes. Your zooms were well done. The match cut section was a bit confusing as I wasn’t sure if you were match cutting with ‘cuts’ or with a blur pan to the next pose. The biggest fault in the board is the omission of the final scene in the LA restaurant. Besides that, your board was easy to follow.
Hi Amanda,
ReplyDeleteAs you’ll see in my uploads, I added arrows to a few sections to make movements more obvious. Your scene and panel numbering was off... any cut that happens in a board should have a new scene number. The panels correspond to the poses of those scenes. Your zooms were well done. The match cut section was a bit confusing as I wasn’t sure if you were match cutting with ‘cuts’ or with a blur pan to the next pose. The biggest fault in the board is the omission of the final scene in the LA restaurant. Besides that, your board was easy to follow.