Although your images could have stood on it’s own in certain parts, adding text really helps the reader to really understand the board... especially if they fall on a drawing they find difficult to decipher. Also, if the script says something, you need to draw it. If it ends inside a shot of a LA restaurant, you need to include it. If they say there’s a timelapse.. you also need to draw it. If there isn’t more specifics on what it is, you have to plan out what those shots will look like. By simply writing ‘timelapse,’ you’re missing a very important section of the story and the board wouldn’t be considered complete unless you draw out what the time lapse looks like. Your camera move diagrams were clear... i just added specifics to which panel corresponded to which spot in the diagram the camera would be.
Hi Hao,
ReplyDeleteAlthough your images could have stood on it’s own in certain parts, adding text really helps the reader to really understand the board... especially if they fall on a drawing they find difficult to decipher. Also, if the script says something, you need to draw it. If it ends inside a shot of a LA restaurant, you need to include it. If they say there’s a timelapse.. you also need to draw it. If there isn’t more specifics on what it is, you have to plan out what those shots will look like. By simply writing ‘timelapse,’ you’re missing a very important section of the story and the board wouldn’t be considered complete unless you draw out what the time lapse looks like. Your camera move diagrams were clear... i just added specifics to which panel corresponded to which spot in the diagram the camera would be.