Hi Julien, Your storyboard was pretty easy to read. You omitted the page/scene and panel labeling, which is important to include in any storyboard. You need to include them because they helps the reader in knowing when cuts happen. There’s a section in scene 3 where you’ve indicated a camera move but what you had in mind wasn’t very clear. Besides those two things, any notes I made are pretty minor. Nice work.
Hi Julien,
ReplyDeleteYour storyboard was pretty easy to read. You omitted the page/scene and panel labeling, which is important to include in any storyboard. You need to include them because they helps the reader in knowing when cuts happen. There’s a section in scene 3 where you’ve indicated a camera move but what you had in mind wasn’t very clear. Besides those two things, any notes I made are pretty minor. Nice work.