Adding scene and panel numbers really help with the reading of a storyboard. It helps the reader identify any cuts that happen from scene to scene. Your drawings are pretty clearly drawn, but adding more descriptive text and arrows help decipher the action in your scenes. For example, in sc 3b and sc 3c, I wouldn’t be quite sure the jelly fish collide if I didn’t know the script.
Hello Rodrigo,
ReplyDeleteAdding scene and panel numbers really help with the reading of a storyboard. It helps the reader identify any cuts that happen from scene to scene. Your drawings are pretty clearly drawn, but adding more descriptive text and arrows help decipher the action in your scenes. For example, in sc 3b and sc 3c, I wouldn’t be quite sure the jelly fish collide if I didn’t know the script.