You’ve managed to draw things out very clearly but your lack of text (besides dialogue)and sc/pnl labelling makes this a thumbnail board and not the full storyboard the assignment is meant to be. Without text, I can’t tell where mills is meant to be in your last few panels. It also makes commenting on anything hard to reference unless I’m typing it directly on your board. Is there a full board that you didn’t upload?
Hi Roberto,
ReplyDeleteYou’ve managed to draw things out very clearly but your lack of text (besides dialogue)and sc/pnl labelling makes this a thumbnail board and not the full storyboard the assignment is meant to be. Without text, I can’t tell where mills is meant to be in your last few panels. It also makes commenting on anything hard to reference unless I’m typing it directly on your board. Is there a full board that you didn’t upload?